A Man Who Does not Love
a heart of blood now grey and dead
in grave of life, no more tears to shed..
poisoned by dreams unfaithful to him
what can be said ?..to a man who lost within..!
Now he hums….he hums in his stark
But no one comes, never came a bark !!
Sitting on some street he writes his only song..my lady stole my heart, n added to her chart !!
Tumbling in his thoughts..he was penning her wrongs !!
He wz tearing every memory n wz fighting every tear…
Writing his scarlet’s name he wz gulping evry bear !!
For he loved his sally..he created a valley !!
Holding her hand..he will book his wedding band !!
But she who didn’t care, she had sm affair..
For her it was some game..for which she couldn’t be blamed !!
He gave his heart…he gave ol treasure…
For whom he loved..he promised very leisure !!
His love is dead n has come dis day !!
Writing his pain.. condolence he pay !!
She went in some car..he took the road to bar
Hiding in many..he lost his every penny !!
Writing in his piece.. he wrote her every trick !
He wrote those rosy days..he wrote on ol bricks !!
Lying in his lain..the man so dead..
Groin of his plight..wid pain he fights !!
He says he loved once….till date he pays its price !!
Writing his only song…in every line he dies !!
By: Kavya n Prateek.
ur thought iz creative...i luv it..bt 1 thng i noticed..there were lines where u were explicit..as in raw..and lines which were inspiringly poetic...in all i'm happy bt i wud lyk to contb..i wud suggest little chngs if thts okay...bt seriously too good yaar..socch acchi hai..aur kya chahiye..!..:)
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